In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society?
Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing population.
People argue that in many developed countries, the average human lifespan is increasing more and more as people are eating better as well as exercising more and this results in living longer. This will cause a serious issue is putting a heavy burden on the government and it can be addressed by expanding the retirement age.
Population ageing issues will create a heavy burden on the government and this is also the biggest challenge in developed nations. Indeed, to gain well-being for the elderly who exceed the working-age, the government has to devote a large budget to old people such as retirement pension, over 80 pension or fund for the elderly healthcare organizations. It is obviously those people not only take a budget from the government but also don’t create added value, that is, they can’t make money. Besides, the population scale in the workforce will reduce since it loses a large number of laborers and therefore, tax revenue of the government. It will be more serious if the growth rate of the ageing population is significant. Consequently, it will impact negatively on the economy's health.
Although there are a lot of solutions to limit the adverse effect of the ageing population, expanding the retirement age may be the easiest way. Nowadays, people aged between 60-65 are still healthy enough to continue working because they can access higher health service quality as well as have a higher living standard. For instance, before the average lifespan was about 65 years old and they were as old and weak as the person who is over 75-year now, and their productivity was very low at the same time, while the people aged 65 now can work normally. In addition, increasing the retirement age will help manufactures have a richly experienced workforce and save the cost of training new employees who have just entered the labor market. As a result, tax revenue will increase significantly.
In conclusion, increasing the retirement age should be applied to deal with the problem which will be caused by an ageing population in developed countries. If I were a policymaker, I would like to put forward this solution.
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- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing population 73
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing population 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...an lifespan is increasing more and more as people are eating better as well as exe...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...re and more as people are eating better as well as exercising more and this result...
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Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he workforce will reduce since it loses a large number of laborers and therefore, tax revenue of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98328690808 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79845462676 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545961002786 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2717442342 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260298133214 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968738807329 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06766087992 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180604966141 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539847975319 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.