In developing countries children in rural communities have less access to education Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Inte

In a ruler area mostly individuals are deprived from higher education due to lack of tutor as well as study sector some think that modern technology is best way for providing education but other oppose its Trend I will discuss both statements with my personal view

To begin with people who are in favour in opening schools and teachers she is its best way of study because teachers make or role model for every pupils and teachers. Always make good balance among students under rule Regulation and become a good student by Getting higher study computer can not take place of good tutor moreover students always learn moral and ethics values in schools from their teachers because and visual spend most of time with other students and learn how to communicate with others what things is good or bad in the society so computer never took place of good teacher

On the other hand Technology plays a crucial role in modern is area so computer has on importance in the students life which is people on the get was as well as latest material from high standard structure of education apart from this teachers can easily understand their Students by visual and tutor also can teach weak students by different methods with the help of videos mostly students from learn easily from computer and so computer is good in developing good areas

In conclusion teaching to student has been become easy by advanced technology but this method can be continue only in urban areas with the help of teacher teacher and school always make you help good careers of student every children in their life

Votes
Average: 7.1 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...ector some think that modern technology is best way for providing education but other o...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ea so computer has on importance in the students life which is people on the get was as ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ndard structure of education apart from this teachers can easily understand their St...
^^^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: teacher
...ue only in urban areas with the help of teacher teacher and school always make you help good ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78181818182 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27967229775 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516363636364 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 137.0 20.2975951904 675% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 358.5 49.4020404114 726% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 657.5 106.682146367 616% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 137.5 20.7667163134 662% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 53.0 7.06120827912 751% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159261980891 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122512267668 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00600534187713 0.0667982634062 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106195313497 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00806956166475 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 69.8 13.0946893788 533% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -59.12 50.2224549098 -118% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 55.5 11.3001002004 491% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.65 8.58950901804 159% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.8 10.1190380762 561% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...ector some think that modern technology is best way for providing education but other o...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ea so computer has on importance in the students life which is people on the get was as ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ndard structure of education apart from this teachers can easily understand their St...
^^^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: teacher
...ue only in urban areas with the help of teacher teacher and school always make you help good ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78181818182 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27967229775 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516363636364 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 137.0 20.2975951904 675% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 358.5 49.4020404114 726% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 657.5 106.682146367 616% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 137.5 20.7667163134 662% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 53.0 7.06120827912 751% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159261980891 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122512267668 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00600534187713 0.0667982634062 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106195313497 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00806956166475 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 69.8 13.0946893788 533% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -59.12 50.2224549098 -118% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 55.5 11.3001002004 491% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.65 8.58950901804 159% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.8 10.1190380762 561% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.