with the development of technology and science,some people believe that there is no great value of artists such as musicians and painters.What are the things can do but the scientist cannot ?why art should be encouraged more?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, may, regarding, so, third, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92016806723 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.46316001625 2.80592935109 159% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718487394958 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.387358989 49.4020404114 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.8 106.682146367 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6 20.7667163134 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.6 7.06120827912 419% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15992038988 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800843773866 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373371453607 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616083975155 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433210297598 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.94 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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