The basic principles and discipline learned from the great people, like mother, father, and teacher. Most of the people think that discipline should be learn from teachers and some other people negotiate on that and prescribe parents should take major role in children’s behavior. This essay will provide about the role of teachers and parents in handling their students, and provide detailed analysis to aid readers in with deciding who should consider major responsible for their behavior.
The teachers should always play a great role in students academic performance, apart from that, teachers should take care of students discipline. Some people stand on the point that teachers are the at most responsibilities because they know the psychology of students. Every individual student has their own personality, the teacher should analyze the behavior of student. Tutor can module the student’s frequency to his frequency, because he/ she has capability to set students according to discipline. Teachers should give preference to students interests and aid and guide them to reach pinnacle. Similarly, the teachers teach moral lessons apart from academic courses, this could leads to imbibe moral habits into in their activity. Sometimes, the teachers should have right to punish them under unnatural circumstances.
However, teachers play a main role in the students discipline, parents are the pioneers for their children in teaching about discipline. Parents are the solely responsible people for young children. To illustrate an example for this, the plant should grow straight in young age and it is not possible if it cross the young age and we cannot straighten the bending stem. Likewise, it is arduous for the parents to correct them if the child grow unmoral or boorish. Considerably, parents always support their child in terms of developing good habits.
In my opinion, both teachers and parents are the building blocks for children personality development, and they should buttress their character by supporting and guiding them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learned', 'learnt'?
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... people think that discipline should be learn from teachers and some other people neg...
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Line 2, column 685, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...apart from academic courses, this could leads to imbibe moral habits into in their ac...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'crosses'?
Suggestion: crosses
... young age and it is not possible if it cross the young age and we cannot straighten ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44200626959 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76427533875 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1364372329 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263787452738 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905043326973 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770235446416 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163774031326 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763856358219 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learned', 'learnt'?
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... people think that discipline should be learn from teachers and some other people neg...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 685, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...apart from academic courses, this could leads to imbibe moral habits into in their ac...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'crosses'?
Suggestion: crosses
... young age and it is not possible if it cross the young age and we cannot straighten ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44200626959 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76427533875 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1364372329 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263787452738 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905043326973 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770235446416 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163774031326 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763856358219 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.