Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city versus lining in a small town. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city are the widely discussed but still yields no conclusion. Some supporters might claim that living in big city, there are many good public utilities and convenience public transportation, while some critics are likely to see that this living is chaotic life and cause people stressed. In my opinion, I totally agree with the latter because the drawbacks of downtown living do outweigh their benefits.
However, some advocators may argue that people who dwell in downtown can buy various foods and things from convenience stores or department stores settled near their accommodations. There are many relax places such as café, park, entertainment center and so on. Still, I found that this argument is invalid because every paces in these cities they must pay money. On the other hand, living in small town is better choice since people doesn’t face high living cost. Therefore, is it good to live among high living cost at the same income?
More importantly, another noticeable cons of staying in big city is pollution. Although public transportations are good and diverse, it lead to high pollution as well. Dust and smog make unhealthy and illness to people. Respiratory diseases, effect from pollutions in atmosphere, is the inevitable diseases for urban population. As the result, living in large city is not safe for health.
In conclusion, even though large cities present minor benefits, their drawbacks affect people’s life in many ways. So, I would like to suggest people who lives in big city be concerned about physical and mental health
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the the statement? 84
- large city or small town 78
- the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 67
- Large city and small town 73
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women doing different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: leads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20610687023 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79808220553 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4600199417 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191614844322 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652832755793 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764334473074 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112897173974 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416998564684 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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