Discuss several reasons for the popularity of the mobile phone among youth today.
The compelling development of science and technology give rise to the extensive using of smartphones, especially young people. While some claim that the mobile phone has a pessimistic impact on them, there are stronger reasons why the youngster still stick into it excessively.
The primary reason is that young people can get access to a plenty of methods to entertain without making them fed up with. In other words, youngster always find their joy on the Internet throughout the phone’s screen by surfing the social networking sites, chatting with their friends or playing games. According to a research from the Research Gate, there was more than 41% of teenaged participants using smartphones for 4-6 hours per day, more than 20% spending from 6 to 8 hours a day. Most of them confirmed their purpose is social networking sites and online interaction with their friends. They can have gossips all the day just by sending memes to each other, or else some hilarious video on Tiktok. Playing games is also a popular way to delighting themselves with the smart phones.
On the other hand, apart from the entertaining purpose of using phones, it is undeniable that mobile phones are extremely convenient to our daily activities. In particular, everthing can be done only by a smartphones, from contacting, searching for information, and a number of smart applications supported by AI. For example, many people has given up the habit of using wallet for the sake of Internet banking. It is really beneficial when we do not have to keep an eye on the cash, having a question of how much we have spent today. Using e-banking wallet is also a great way to help people manage their personal finance as well as avoid cash robbing.
In conclusion, entertainment and conveniece are two main reasons why smart phones are more and more likely to be prominent. It is high time that smart phones’ manufacturers made every effort to run on this technological race.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... friends or playing games. According to a research from the Research Gate, there was more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, still, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79390652712 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0940238232 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147872970354 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453391506181 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389977464897 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896567122513 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186567226613 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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