With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
In the recent modern life, the relationship among members of family becomes looser with rising number of breakdown and divorced family. This essay will analyze the main cause of this problem and recommend solution for dealing with this issue.
The foremost cause of un-tight family issue was originated in rising stress of work and earning money. In the market-oriented society wi high difference between the rich and the poor, people are forced to rusk forward making money as much as they can. As a result, they are so busy with work and have not time for looking after their family. In addition, their work stress sometimes affected seriously their life. It has been in Japan that many people work until midnight and there were cases of being dead at the office desk.
A possible to this problem would be to raise people’s awareness about the vital role of family in their life. The stories, articles, books, videos, dramas and films on family topic such as how to balance work and family of to develop the happy family would be produced and promoted broadly throughout the country. In Vietnam, there were so many interesting films on this topic introduced in the Vietnam television program such as “Nguoc chieu nuoc mat”, “Ca mot doi an oan” etc.
In conclusion, the tress of work caused the problem that family today is not as close as they used to be. To solve this problem, we would focus to equip people necessary knowledge and skills of improving value of family and balancing work and family life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pos;, 'Ca mot doi an oan' etc. In conclusion, the tress of work caused ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91570881226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43775734098 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1202999269 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299199130079 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118173810744 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102554442013 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199186028073 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089750893062 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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