do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?
Nowadays , with the rapid development of media and social networks. most of famous people who are known by public. Therefore, they are easy to earn a lot of salary on short time. but I totally disagree with this contention.
Some young people do wish to meet their idols, they are ready to spend much money to participate in concerts or fashion shows. In addition, they would like to learn and become a famous person to look like their idol in the future.
In my opinions, well- known people is a normal people. While there are many doctors or teachers who are doing the most important jobs but they can get a monthly salary of half of the celebrities making in a day. they should have earned a lot of salary comparison with their dedication. On the other hand, celebrities who often born with their talent for singing or acting, they have not spent years at university. Sometimes, their behavior is not respectable with others. For instance, in my country has Dam Vinh Hung is a famous singer, he reach the top of levels of music whom earn a lot of money easily, what doctor or teacher never do to get that money. but he does like to criticize person who has his reverse thinking although his fans always support to him anytime. that is an unreasonable with celebrities is look like him.
In conclusion, it is not necessary to pay too much money for celebrities because they do not contribute to development society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54427287189 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4794852448 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159308635516 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511038231173 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073224092338 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121459812378 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901280988915 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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