Nowadays people like to watch live matches and concerts. People had released and spend time with the friends and family. I think it is more enjoyable to watch live matches and concerts rather than watching on television. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
As my perspective, it is better to watch live matches and concerts. People get time to enjoy and will also get a chance to meet with their favourite celebrity. Along with this, in live sports matches people watch how their favourite players play and look like. For instance, nowadays most of children like to play cricket they will watch in stadium of how cricket players play well in match. Children will learn new techniques by watching sports match in stadium.
Furthermore, masses feel more enjoyable and meet new people. Environment of live performance is very good. For instance, audience Cheers and shout. People also take photographs in cameras and when they see those photographs they remember whole day. Moreover, people make more new friends and eat food together while watching live performance. We save our all sweet memories and feel enjoyable by watching videos in camera.
In conclusion, I would like to say that we should join live performance to make ourself more enjoyable and cheerful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...y and look like. For instance, nowadays most of children like to play cricket they will watch in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09004739336 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59672394089 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545023696682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7923650282 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.125 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1875 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207490900376 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764694948414 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594891489134 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134707155213 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280440372729 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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