In this 21st century, there has been increasing the number of divorce rate day by day. People feel better to live without spouse. Some people think that childbearing is very difficult for single parents from financial hardship and have a more responsibility of families. Other people argue that there are wonderful benefits for a single parent in raising families but I believe there has more struggle in rising families for a single parents, ultimately men and women should share equal responsibilities of parenting for rising families.
Some people believe that being a single is infinitely preferable to living a bad marriage. Somewhere the children raised to seen with fighting of parents. That considers them to negative effects on brain. They might learn the negative behaviour from bad environment of family. Moreover, consider all time to figuring out the partner bargain, fulfilling all of requirement and figuring out the new demand of spouse may distract to focus on the children so, it’s very preferable to doing alone is easier than have a spouse.
However, single parents might be face the financial unfeasible or hardship to fulfil all the requirements and demand of children. Nowadays, everything has too costly; the price has increasing of thing day by day so, it is very difficult to handle all expenses by the single parents earnings. Single parents might lose to give all facilities for children as like as both parents. For instance, the education was more expensive this day, if you want to join children in good private boarding school. Thus, if both parents share equal efforts is far better for children rather than single parents.
Some others people claim that a single parent has better for families to make proper and own decision. There are no debates for any decision between families. Single parent continuously trying to maintain proper household and will raise healthy children. Single parents frequently take single own decision without ask anyone. He/she continuously thinks about their own way to handle the families. Likewise, single parents able to make own rule and regulations for a healthy family which is very favourable for each member and make fix time table for a children education, entertainment and sleeping time table according to parent’s time.
On the other hand, it is important that children are able to get the equal responsibilities from the both parents. Single parents might be faced the difficulties to handle all responsibility for caring families. For instance after a long work, the parents must return home to cook dinner, clean the house, spend a little time with child because there are no anyone to divide the responsibilities. It is very difficult to do everything perfectly and may lose form the responsibility. Therefore, share responsibility of family between both parents should make happier family.
In conclusion, it is clearly seen that it arises more obstacles for single parent to give the best parental to rising families. Single parents may face the financial hardship and difficult to take all responsibility of families. Therefore, both parents should take equal responsibilities for raising families and make them a good future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ancial unfeasible or hardship to fulfil all of the requirements and demand of children. No...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ly take single own decision without ask any one. He/she continuously think about their ...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...ithout ask any one. He/she continuously think about their own way to handle the famil...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...all responsibility for caring families. for instance after a long work , the parent...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...families. for instance after a long work , the parents must return home to cook di...
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Line 6, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...no anyone to divide the responsibilities . It is very difficult to do everything p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...families and make them a good future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'likewise', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255652173913 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.16 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114782608696 0.0946595960268 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0452173913043 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0208695652174 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109565217391 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.04 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87320821449 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0417391304348 0.0326793684256 128% => OK
Particles: 0.00347826086957 0.00163938923432 212% => OK
Determiners: 0.0991304347826 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0208695652174 0.021408717616 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00173913043478 0.011925033212 15% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3232.0 1933.35771543 167% => OK
No of words: 520.0 316.048096192 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21538461538 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.20517956788 114% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.407692307692 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288461538462 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213461538462 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138461538462 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87320821449 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.037074148 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448076923077 0.56093040696 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.7820315203 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0891783567 174% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5714285714 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6571499363 49.517814964 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.464285714286 0.814263465372 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 47.4175824176 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.79230769231 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148285504721 0.332605444948 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0909219926993 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0629320464112 0.0668466124924 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491861278943 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146972495163 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552527082607 0.134430193775 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504139480083 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315547050156 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0888627407932 0.0638462369009 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973106121416 0.228012699653 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539818663723 0.058150111329 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 10.4468937876 230% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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