Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet."
Write about 250 words to support your opinion (and do not include your personal information).
There is a controversy that junk food, which is becoming more and more popular, negatively affects our way of life and diet. Personally, I am totally convinced by this idea for several following reasons.
Firstly, having fast food does have a negative impact on our lifestyle. Since we do not have to cook by ourselves, we are made to be inactive and depend too much on it. Therefore, if no amenity sells junk food in where we are staying, we will have to stand the hungriness. Moreover, as we do not know how to deal with fresh food, we have to spend a large amount of money per day buying junk food. Even if we do not spend much money in one day, it will become a lot when we add it all up after a long period of purchasing fast food on a daily basis.
Secondly, junk food also affects our diet and health. Most fast food contains additives and much fat but without other substances, take vitamins for example, so consumers may lack those nutrients. That is not good for our bodies at all when we do not take enough substances that the bodies need for an effective process of metabolism. In addition, too much fat can lead us to obesity, which is a serious disease causing many other problems like heart issues. It is a pity that there are even more such terrible situations in this modern life.
In conclusion, I take sides with the idea that fast food is detrimental to our lifeway and diet for the reasons described above. Therefore, we should consider carefully when eating that kind of food to keep ourselves as fit and healthy as we want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45964912281 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.453291581 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1790919742 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244582757105 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930226734403 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647769219819 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153757908561 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139918946387 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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