Leadership is the most vital role in the society.Most of the people believe that it is good to be active member of the group while others think being a leader of the community is respectable position.In my view,Being both leader and the member is important to the group or community in a required moment.
first of all,I believe that leaders are great which help each and every individuals while they are in pain and lead the nation toward the path of development.Moreover,I feel leadership is an art which help people to attain their quality of life in a good manner by coming forward and taking all the responsibilities of the citizens.for illustration ,One of the famous leader of our country late B.P koirala was the leader of the Nepali congress was elected as the first prime minister of our country.thus, Being leader gain you the respectable position in group.
Nevertheless,On the other side, I wonder that as an active member of the crew we can contribute much more to the team.Furthermore being only a member of the crew help tom reduce the pressure of the group so that we can work on our stuffs efficiently and effectively so that members can provide much more vital ideas to leader for betterment of their community.For instance,one of my uncle is the active member of the juice factory because of him that factory is making progress rapidly. So, being a simple employee also can provide a great thought for their society as well as for companies.
In nutshell,i do believe that both member and a leader hold the equal responsibilities to their society as well to the company and both have the equal amount of respect in the society.there fore whatever is the position, it contribute equal to the community .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as for, as to, for instance, i feel, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87542087542 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06226394596 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491582491582 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.679687194 49.4020404114 331% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.6 106.682146367 271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.4 20.7667163134 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20478320622 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111018857145 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615058899789 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125922674688 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599916665051 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.0946893788 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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