Do you think it is better to send criminals to prison or let them receive education or job trainings?
Social maladies have been vigorously spreading its prevalence throughout our society for ages. Prison is deemed as the best retribution for those committing crimes. While imprisonment can act as a deterrent to crack down illegal activities, I still hold a strong belief that it should be coordinated with other alternatives.
On the one hand, it is argued by some people that custodial sentences are still indispensable, given its exorbitance. Those who either perpetrate serious crimes or recidivously present as a hazard should be sentenced into prison. Imprisonment, however, sometimes exert a crippling effect on arrestees. Indeed, the fact that people committing petty crimes together with those severely violating the law are isolated from society and put in a same place may result in normalizing criminal’s behaviors, adversely impacting their physical and mental health.
Yet, those opposing to such a view would contend that education and job trainings play a pivotal role in answering a puzzling question of how to bring down society’s crime rate. It is undeniable that providing education helps to raise offenders’ awareness, perception as well as their self-esteem, which prevents them from breaking the law. For example, those suffering poverty, illiteracy or material deprivation are likely to involve into illegal activities. In addition, vocational trainings offer to ensure their job security after being released. Actually, ex-prisoners frequently have to grapple with being jobless; thus, render them difficult to re-integrate into society and easy to fall back into a cycle of offending.
In conclusion, given both sides of each approaches, I am still an advocate of the idea that the not only imprisonment but also other punitive measures should be considered and appreciated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62909090909 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17074228085 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6459650224 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103059777835 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334452460568 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356485785832 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486013581982 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526974274858 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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