Do young people today make good use of their leisure time? Or do they spend too much time watching television and playing video games, instead of taking part in more productive activities?
In today's world, as everything is rapidly changing and developing innovations, young generations are therefore also changeable and following these improvements on their regular basic, including spending square time. Some are currently making the best use of their unoccupied moments, whereas many youngsters adore wasting time for unhelpfulnesses. This essay will discuss upmentioned trend, and in the meanwhile point out several consequences leading to this affair.
To begin with, there are still existing young people obviously know how to make the most of today's time, much as time is a significant element, which is directly affecting individuals. For instance, in their free time, they do welfare work, read books, learn a new language, and so one. In particular, they help their parents complete household chores, have conversations with brothers or sisters, or even play sports with friends. Those who fully employ time to do this would get benefits from durable wholesome relationships, as taking time for friendly acquaintances and family is crucial and comfortable. As a result, those teenagers will be open-hearted, active, as well as well-experienced and always ready to integrate with the society. On the other hand, there is also a great number of groups who are fancy filling themselves with inessential things. They like gossips and even are willing to ignore the truth in order to listen and talk unfounded stories that are transmitted and changed constantly from people to people. Moreover, not only do juveniles stay at home and select video games and internet to interact, but they also refuse to participate in a club or outdoor activities. In consequence, those parts of society will be inexperienced, dependent and at risk of health-damaging diseases owing to having used technological devices too much, such as obesity, sight-shortedness, internet addiction, and so on.
In short, in present time, lots of youth take advantage of time, while others enjoy spending time being connected with virtual world. People should not use leisure time for unnecessaries and have to alternatively perform what are good and energetic for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 468, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al consequences leading to this affair. To begin with, there are still existing ...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the todays') or simply say ''most todays''.
Suggestion: most of the todays; most todays
...g people obviously know how to make the most of todays time, much as time is a significant ele...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: AND_SO_ONE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'and so on' (="etc.")?
Suggestion: and so on
...work, read books, learn a new language, and so one. In particular, they help their parents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in particular, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43323442136 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11562808943 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655786350148 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8882067322 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.785714286 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33538885971 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986068664977 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669480912538 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212620942336 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440631193099 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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