In 21centuries, drug abuse in young generation is the burning question of the day. Massive number of individuals are categoried as drug addicted. There are plethora of reasons for this critical problem. Through this essay, I shall highlight the main factors responsible for it as well as recommend some possible suggestions to overcome this problem.
It is common assertion that, youngsters prefer to live independent and feel more comfortable with their peer groups. Therefore, the most prominent factor is responsible for taking drugs by youth is peer pressure. Whenever, individuals having same age group spend plethora of their time with each other. As a result, grasp bad as well as good things from them. Due to this reason, they try to engulf drugs under the peer pressure. This problem could be solved by creating general awareness among youth generation as well as update their knowledge with respect to ill effects of drugs on health.
In addition to this, unemployment is the second most important factor related to drug abuse in youth. Recent survey was conducted and published in Hindustan times based on same topic that more than half individuals especially, young generation suffer from depression as well as health related problems. This is due to the consumption of high dose of drugs, for instance Morphine, cocaine and many more. It seems that mostly drug addicted individuals are unemployed. Therefore, divert their mind they prefer to consume drugs. Nodoubt, it is serious problem still, it can be overcome if government take initiative to develop industrialised area. Thus, most youth able to get high profile jobs in different sectors and follow right track.
Therefore, it can be inferred that, nodoubt, todays youth divert their mind towards drugs, even though voluminous steps would be taken by governance like create job opportunities as well as awareness that ultimately leads to fruitful solution to tackle this complex matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...taking drugs by youth is peer pressure. Whenever, individuals having same age group spen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2875399361 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73630562132 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.5799946246 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188296207158 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594515416794 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395934103386 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11048164322 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569077800916 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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