Due to development and rapid expansion in some countries, many small business are unable to compete. Some people thinks closure of local business will bring about death to local communities. To what extent do you agree
Over the years, evolvement and growth of shopping malls has results to retreat of petty trade in some districts. It is believed by certain people that the shutdown of these small firms will lead to extinction of the local suburbs. While establishment of supermarkets negatively affect the sales of small firms, I somewhat disagree it would fazed out the locality because shopping malls provide job opportunities for the inhabitants, also huge tax is being paid to develop the welfare of the community.
To begin, it is noteworthy that small scale business plays a vital role in the development of the community. The increase trend of shopping mall has significantly reduce the patronage of local stores by customers, thereby reducing revenues generated by these petty traders. To elucidate, these companies acquire goods at lower prices from the manufacturers and sell to the consumers at cheaper rates. This ultimately renders the small scale market redundant because the consumers prefers to trade at low prices. Therefore, the local enterprise are incapacitated to contribute to the development of the community due to low income.
Nevertheless, the set up of a shopping venture provides more job opportunities to the occupant of the community. A large scale business requires high level of workmanship compared to small scale business. A research work carried out in 2018 by Oyo state group of business owners revealed that shopping outlets creates about 10,000 job opportunities yearly within the metropolis. Futhermore, these stores are charged with huge tax, this high level are used for development of the district.
To sum up, the increase trend of supermarkets is negatively affecting the thrive of small scale business. I partially disagree that this development will lead to the extinction of local communities because large scale business contributes to the growth of the community by providing job opportunities and paying huge tax which is used for the development of the community welfare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'faze'
Suggestion: faze
...all firms, I somewhat disagree it would fazed out the locality because shopping malls...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...rend of shopping mall has significantly reduce the patronage of local stores by custom...
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Line 11, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Nevertheless, the set up of a shopping venture provides more job oppor...
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Line 17, column 71, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...of supermarkets is negatively affecting the thrive of small scale business. I partially di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39432176656 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02712249977 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504731861199 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1274979358 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176348122329 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063068762073 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463743462085 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111596807156 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224236953979 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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