During in the modern time, there is a conflicting idea that young people must get married before the age of thirty. This trend has some advantages for both youths and society. This essay will debate why a marriage must occur before the fourth decades of people’s life.
If people get married before pass the thirty years, there would be at least two significant positive consequences. Firstly, by this trend couple have an extra responsibility to each other. Because of this, they may mobilize the whole of their potential to build a successful future. In fact, a couple could share their duties to operate skillfully. Furthermore, if people are encouraged to marry, they could have babies at a young age before they lost this chance to have children, especially for women’s physical. Owing to, they would have exceeded memorable moments and have a remarkable pastime while living together. These reasons clear why marriage at an early age is a crucial issue for each person and society.
Married at a young age affects society. There will be an enormous number of aged people if the rate of marriage ages is increased tremendously. In contrast, by getting married during the third decades of life, birthrate could be slightly increased, and the average of ages in one society might be logical. As a result, although it has some cost while children are got older, in the near future society's wheels are be controlled by fresh employees to improve it.
To conclude, this essay discussed why this idea exists that married must occur before the age of thirty. In addition, this is improved positive sides of this trend is outweighed negative sides.
During in the modern time, there is a conflicting idea that young people must get married before the age of thirty. This trend has some advantages for both youths and society. This essay will debate why a marriage must occur before the fourth decades of people’s life.
If people get married before pass the thirty years, there would be at least two significant positive consequences. Firstly, by this trend couple have an extra responsibility to each other. Because of this, they may mobilize the whole of their potential to build a successful future. In fact, a couple could share their duties to operate skillfully. Furthermore, if people are encouraged to marry, they could have babies at a young age before they lost this chance to have children, especially for women’s physical. Owing to, they would have exceeded memorable moments and have a remarkable pastime while living together. These reasons clear why marriage at an early age is a crucial issue for each person and society.
Married at a young age affects society. There will be an enormous number of aged people if the rate of marriage ages is increased tremendously. In contrast, by getting married during the third decades of life, birthrate could be slightly increased, and the average of ages in one society might be logical. As a result, although it has some cost while children are got older, in the near future society's wheels are be controlled by fresh employees to improve it.
To conclude, this essay discussed why this idea exists that married must occur before the age of thirty. In addition, this is improved positive sides of this trend is outweighed negative sides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... in the near future societys wheels are be controlled by fresh employees to improv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, third, while, at least, in addition, in contrast, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0036101083 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63872000287 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552346570397 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.004854574 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562564405063 0.244688304435 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187064736654 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177903669107 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.420148544605 0.151304729494 278% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.316144312245 0.056905535591 556% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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