Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and for society as a whole.
Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages
The progress of nation's economic is commonly believed to bring benefits not only for individual but also for the community. Despite several drawbacks of this phenomenon, there are a wide range of merits that are worth considered.
On the one hand, economic development consists of undisputed advantages. First and foremost, income increasing means more opportunities for higher education also for better health care. This will improve human's lives financially and physically. More than that, individuals are becoming freely in choosing their lifestyle. For instance, the shortage of money can not prevent people from travelling during holidays or they can choose what food they prefer, what clothes they love. It is definitely help them release their tension and increase their satisfaction, which also solve other issues in contemporary life today such as stressful, depression, suicide. More importantly, the wealthy of government funding is a profound contribution in improving many aspects of community, from social life such as education, entertainment, environment, etc. to citizens' life including health care system, pensions for elderly, schooling, etc. These are expected to turn one country into the place worth living.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages about this growth that we should not ignore. Firstly, the economic development may result in the increase in inequality between the poor and rich. Secondly, from environmental perspective, the growth of economic without an substantial methods which are depending heavily on natural resources would boost the planet to disastrous. Last but not least, when there are no concern to make ends meets, another problem may be appeared. Take America as an example, despite the wealthy of the country, it is still facing a tremendous challenges such as terrorist, political protests, and most importantly, discrimination.
In conclusion, developing one's economic is a universal goal for any country and authorities try their best to achieve this goal. Although there are a numerous disadvantages which are mostly social and environmental issues that we have yet figured out how to overcome, the merits still outweigh its drawbacks. Due to the fact that is beneficial for both individual's lives and government's functions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59025787966 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02433324412 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621776504298 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3107690382 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.684210526 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266482859903 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734897462019 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746924383167 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165597620841 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489985699383 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.