Economic growth is often mentioned in the annually report to judge whether the ruling party implemented appropriate fiscal strategy. Apart from success in economy, from my perspective, other indexes should be placed on the same value.
There is no doubt that financial situation in a country such as economic growth and low employment rate were mentioned by every parties through the speech before election. A party, which can propose the best policy, would be selected by people. It indicates that financial success is certainly the most concern for a nation. A country's welfare is often constructed on the levels of wealth its people enjoy. Without worrying about the cost of living, crimes in a city will be reduced and the sense of pleasure among citizens will be fulfilled. For example, with adequate money, low unemployment rate and crime rate, Norway has been selected as the most happiest country throughout the world.
Along with economic success, other factors such as education, human rights and freedom should be regarded as equally important as economic situation. A well-designed education system is vital for any nation. It cultivates the quality of future generations and good members in society. Next, human rights such as equal gender right is another element of crucial importance. For example, a country in which women would be discriminated in workplace or do not receive the same treatment as men will be seen as having traditional thoughts and supporting sexism which are both negative images. Finally, the levels of freedom is another prime index to evaluate whether a country is successful. It would be seen as uncivilized if people live in a country always being careful about ideology ones own or words ones said.
By way of conclusion, success can be measured in a variety of ways, and all the aforementioned elements are of equal importance.
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 67
- the line graph shows visits to and from the uk from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by uk residents in 1999. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. 78
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'report judging'.
Suggestion: report judging
...owth is often mentioned in the annually report to judge whether the ruling party implemented ap...
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Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...e rate, Norway has been selected as the most happiest country throughout the world. Along ...
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Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...e rate, Norway has been selected as the most happiest country throughout the world. Along ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, well, apart from, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17049180328 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77415801657 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8511015763 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227123203935 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647716856594 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603702448211 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127377805779 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345124113131 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.