It is true that the way to evaluate a nation’s achievement is a debatable issue. This essay will examine some factors and decide which is the most crucial among them.
Firstly, education is the foundation of a country, which plays an important role in nation’s development. This means that educational system enables people, especially the young generation, to equip themselves with precious knowledge and valuable skills, thereby contributing to the progression of economy as well as politics and society. Secondly, another crucial aspect is ecosystem since environmental issues can have vital influences on people’s lives. For example, if a national has the environment deteriorated, such as deforestation or exploitation of natural resources, it can lead to the shortage of energy in that country, which curbs nation’s both economic and social improvement. Finally, healthcare is also a significant influence that that should be considered. Being motivated by living heathier lives, individuals not only experience an enhancement in living standard but also can have their productivities increased.
In my opinion, the most crucial element is education in those above-mentioned factors. This aspect may allow people to evolve comprehensively, as they could cultivate a better understanding of several fields in society. For instance, economy or healthcare and evironmental issues are the fields which are researched in many universities, therefore individuals could learn about them. Consequently, citizens will have a accomplished awareness of solving social problems, so that the nation can reach the sustainable and equitable development, thereby invigorating national domination.
In conclusion, although some considerable factors, which assess national achievement, are provided, I believe that the most essential element among them is education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96296296296 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43877669894 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0790412063 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3076923077 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111340103071 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425318267061 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284750058953 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732139911757 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027501405938 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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