In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder?
Is it always a good thing or a bad thing?
Working hard during study and job may vary among individual. Some people put more effort than others. This essay will reveal the reason behind this and describe why is it may not beneficial always.
There are several reasons to do hard work while studying and working time. Among them, being a competent candidate on job market and living a standard lifestyle are the topmost cause of it. Individual better knowledge and qualification make a person more competitive on their field which is impossible without more effort on their study. In addition, some people put more effort on their job and do extra hour to earn extra income that help them to fulfil their luxurious desires and unexpected expenses. Regular salary may not be sufficient to fulfil their extra expenditure. For instance, my friend is doing overtime to pay the hospital’s bill of his dad, Otherwise, it may be difficult him to overcome this crisis.
On the other hand, hardworking may not be effective always. Before stepping towards anything always think its risk and benefit ratio. Some people do hard work without consider their health which might be harmful them on next stage. For example, while reading or working staying late night may deprive from sleep, as a result he or she may suffer from major health problem. Moreover, when people give more priority to their work than their family leads to disharmony on family relationship. While working extra hours they spend less time with their loved one because of that queries and discussion start on family consequently they may end their relationship.
In conclusion, many people work harder for their betterment without considering their consequent which may be harmful them on later life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...d describe why is it may not beneficial always. There are several reasons to do ha...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urious desires and unexpected expenses. Regular salary may not be sufficient to ...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... hand, hardworking may not be effective always. Before stepping towards anything alway...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10954063604 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53873093598 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4671045777 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200965104618 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758030923737 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708150516971 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141779050373 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254989059537 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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