Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. Some people believe all levels of education, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people think that being rich has some drawbacks in their life. Although people regard the rich as dishonest, they bring a lot of benefits to their society. In this essay I will explain why I have written above.
Firstly, rich people are afraid of losing their money. So, they always worry about it. Whenever they bunkrupts, they may lose lots of money comparing with other people then as a result they suffer from a heart attack and may die.
Secondly, bilioners do not belive in people around them consequently, they may be isolated and feel alone. For instance, they do not belive even to their wife or children their secrets.
Another words, if rich people want to make great goodness. For example, they may build a large building and give it to poor people who are homeless.
Another benefit of being rich, they can open big factories and provide unemployed people with jobs. It helps to being rich. Other people. If a country has a lot of rich people, then that country's economy will be rise on the short time.
To conclude, even though rich people have some problems, they can help to improve their life of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7135678392 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22361667092 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1978556833 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150877143173 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633291860638 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050468119985 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903721228043 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240067343042 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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