"Education should be free"
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The suggestion about free schooling has always aroused great controversy in the public. Whilst there is an overwhelming majority consenting to fee-free education policy, I personally disagree with it to some extent as I find it rather impracticable regarding some aspects.
Firstly, free education cannot ensure long-term maintenance and investment due to financial limitation. When it comes to reality, schools' budget is absolutely reliant on the government, which is likely to be inadequate to satisfy students' expectation of facilities and teachers' of their salary. Federal taxes can make no difference, unlike common opinions as they are also allocated to other services as indispensable as education like healthcare, national defence, etc.
Moreover, when education is fully funded by federal taxes, which is the only main source of money replacing tuition fee, the government can gain greater control over educational services. Such control is much likely to build up a rigid, unresponsive and bureaucratic education system. Meanwhile, paid education can be independent enough to make necessary changes such as tailoring its own teaching programs or methods for students' sake.
However, the prospect of making education completely free could carry many obvious benefits, which is undeniable. But, after all, it is still a fantasy unless methods of handling its significant drawbacks are adopted. Additionally, there are already plenty of educational supports available, including merit-based scholarships and awards given based on students' performances or income backgrounds, which really ease their financial burden.
In conclusion, completely free education is far from practice as its advantages seem to pale in comparison with drawbacks. Important changes take much consideration; otherwise, they would have adverse effects. Therefore, I would like to emphasize my opinion that free education should be offered to certain students under particular circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, after all, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89236111111 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13322797978 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680555555556 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1038731154 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.214285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172944143328 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572034033449 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413397645798 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095146760701 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294206798115 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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