Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills.Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success.To what extent,do you agree or disagree?

soft skills, often called people skills or emotional intelligence, refer to the ability to interact amicably with others. There is essentially competence to make successfully a job. Always, Manager, Human Resource demands it for lots job interviews in order to maintain her business and attain their goals.

Recently, corporate always built a big network, including interaction between vast various things such as department, workers, customers.It's obviously clear to ensure that the new worker has an optimum skills what is mean technical communication, social, language competency to keep her layout safe in the first step. Also, he usually research a good technical candidature in terms to enrich her team and to enlarge their benefice. But, generally all candidacy doesn’t have equality between these two points, certainly make a good way in social skills, while other one have the contrast. Although, Human Resource takes care of the candidature have a good social skills than technical. A lots said that the technical skills can acquire it by time.

The communication, negotiation, language reaches people to adopt and solve for anywhere kind of issues from social to work.This skill increases her qualification for success in life and in her work.for instance, someone develops, this can have high progress scale what is mean get rapidly professional position.That’s why different people said that soft skills necessary to make sure her qualification and progress in her job.May be taking the responsibility, while social experience avoids to technical can risk durability of position.Uncertainty,the first key of progress scale is the social skills .

To conclude, I often agree with this statement, but also you should take care with technical qualification because the manager doesn’t give a job to anyone don’t have an ideal technical skill. .

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, for instance, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62237762238 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28189477792 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.666102888 49.4020404114 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.8 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232903095735 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855836057131 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462324898569 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136034702528 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386827626511 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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