Environmental damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that environmental deterioration is one of the major issues facing several nations. While there are various reasons for the damage, humanity should be responsible to address this situation by taking some efficient measures.
There are two main causes of global damage, overpopulation and atmospheric pollution. Firstly, there is a rapid growth of world population in these times, which leads to local residents overusing the land and deforestation. As a result, it would put creatures, including both animals and plants, at risk of extinction. For example, Formosa bears are endangered in Taiwan because of the destruction of habitats by citizens. What is more, increasing numbers of the population can trigger air pollution owing to the use of automobiles, such as private vehicles or motorcycles, relying on burning fossil fuel or oil which produces lots of carbon dioxide. Therefore, these factors indeed bring about the loss of some species and greenhouse gas emissions to damage our planet.
However, a few alternatives which may conquer this difficulty and enhance the environment are to reinforce public transport and restrict the use of land. To illustrate, if people take more buses rather than driving their cars, it would cut carbon dioxide emissions. Moreover, the government can call for restricting the available areas to the folks, in order to reduce overexploitation. For instance, the conservation of forests can balance the biosphere and avoid animals to be extinct.
In conclusion, despite the fact that increasing the number of people and destruction of habitats by residents results in negative impacts on the earth, mankind can take a number of methods, namely using more public transport and conservation of specific areas , to take responsibility for the problems they generated.
- Rules and laws keep society stable It cannot work if individuals are free to do whatever they want Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Why 61
- Environmental damage is the problem of most countries What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- Rules and laws keep society stable It cannot work if individuals are free to do whatever they want Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Why 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44169611307 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08387992853 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5823953921 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130719734782 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382584958974 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348304028976 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790824164274 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275278555856 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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