Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
It is a undeniable fact that environmental issues reached to a level, where it is difficult for people and nations to protect it alone, so the best measure to preserve the environment is global efforts. I firmly disagree with this notion and believes that protection of atmosphere is only possible, if individuals, governments and countries take efforts together.
To begin with, why individuals action are necessary for environmental protection because human activities are the root cause of affecting environment. For living a comfortable life, they are cutting trees for furniture and using automobiles for travel. Thus, it might effect the air quality and weather. To exemplify, in India, although government enacted strict punishment for deforestation, people are disobeying rules and continuing their activities. Hence, if individuals want a healthy life, they have to take into consideration their detrimental actions towards environment and need to stop them.
Having said that, humankind has not descent understanding of some environmental emergencies including soil erosion, salinity and global warming. As these kinds of situations need knowledge and research. Therefore, countries can dealt with this through annual surveys conducted by environmentalists. Furthermore, pressing concerns can be discussed with international countries for acquisition of knowledge and finding effective solution for serious environmental issues.
To conclude, although mankind is responsible for some environmental issues, it is the onus of both the individuals and nations to preserve the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
It is a undeniable fact that environmental issu...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... automobiles for travel. Thus, it might effect the air quality and weather. To exempli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94805194805 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36232403489 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1099478576 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260251647247 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827846223911 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056965210762 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152253987746 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323948787347 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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