The government have faced to many hard problems from environment such as climate changes and many other polluted elements. Then, why this happens and how can we address all of those problems? We can analyze this topic in below passages.
These days, people are living in this earth without pay attention on its, they have done many mistakes that makes “nature mother” gets angry. For example, they destroyed forest to build building, they built factory that makes air polluted, they produced many harm products that earth could not live with (plastics) and so on. They live but do not have awareness about earth, that is why environment are completely polluted. Many problems effected to people lives and perhaps they could not live in the dark future of earth with a huge trash around. Then, we need to find solution to address all of problems for earth and also our children in the future.
Firstly, government should appeal people to aware and understand what problems we are solving and they should be more strictly. For example, people live in Singapore must to pay 1000$ or go to jail if they do not protect environment. Secondly, government should focus on public transport to decrease individual transportation to save energy and protect air. Finally, they must find the way to live with trees around; trees and forest is the key to help environment better and fresh. Then, they can grow trees such as Singapore to address environment problem.
In conclusion, we need to care more about earth and environment that we have lived in. Moreover, the problems are easier to solve if people awareness increase. Government should follow all the solution to help their people to live happy and safe environment.
- Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution why is this and how can this problem be solved 56
- Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution why is this and how can this problem be solved 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
.... For example, people live in Singapore must to pay 1000$ or go to jail if they do not ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...e, people live in Singapore must to pay 1000$ or go to jail if they do not protect en...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99652777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51798842758 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3408966133 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243259926263 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943388303796 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580414288823 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170534153409 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735783704334 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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