In an era of globalization, some people think that studying abroad is the best way to attain a well-paid job while others believe other options are better
Discuss both views and give your opinions
In this world of integration, getting an overseas education is often a bone of contention. While some believe that there are other viable methods to be employed for a high-paid job, I still side with those who deem studying abroad a predominant key to getting top positions in a company.
Advocates of the former perspective disregard overseas education, postulating that there are other alternative options to earn a well-paid job. Their reason is that, considering this era of globalization, learning in the domestic country is as beneficial and effective as in foreign countries due to the advancement of the Internet. It is evident that the Internet provides numerous learning opportunities like online courses to students, making a wide amount of knowledge about all facets of life available to them; in turn, they are equipped with sufficient values to fulfill the requirements when applying for a job. Furthermore, some well-paid jobs require applicants with no profound knowledge, nor foreign experience. Instead, soft skills and dedication are more valued, leading to the conclusion that individuals do not necessarily have to possess a foreign education background to achieve a high income in a certain profession.
However, the aforementioned perspective overlooks the significant merits studying overseas entails, especially when international recognition and experience accumulation are considered. As for external appreciation, by taking an abroad course, overseas students are likely to acquire international-standard recognition, namely college diplomas, degrees and various certificates, all of which will contribute to a better profile. These factors will ultimately be a great advantage in the contemporary society that prioritizes achievements over others. Regarding experience, some countries such as America and Australia can offer students a high-quality education with advanced teaching techniques and facilities, thus providing them with a more welcoming access to the expertise than their own countries. Consequently, the expertise and knowledge foreign students accumulate through their terms of staying in these countries will act as a plus point when competing against other candidates for a desired position, securing them a highly-remunerated job.
In closing, the assertion that learning in domestic countries plays an equal part as learning overseas when it comes to taking an occupation is an oversimplification. I would argue that the understanding of other countries' values and experiences is essential and acts as a catalyst for a prospective career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77545691906 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46935007074 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595300261097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7452621963 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3571428571 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174468467716 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606142442648 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616076753172 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114439627465 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450180296949 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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