Even though globalization affects the world's economy and society in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss both sides.
The process of globalization has affected on various aspects of human life over the world. Some people argue that it makes both of positive and negative influences to the global economy and society. This essay will discuss both sides of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, globalization gives a lot of advantages to the world's economy and society. Through this process, countries have chances to expand their international relationships which help them to learn and import more smart technologies in order to develop economic infrastures better. In addition, the globalization creates good conditions for promoting exachanges of cultures among societies. Basing on that, people from one country can understand customs, lifestyle and religions different. So they will gain common knowledges and interest to build a peace over the world easier.
On the other hand, besides great impacts, globalization gets some disadvantages to our economy and society. Focusing on common goals may be harm to maintain cultural identities of ethnic groups. People living in many places will wear the same clothes from the same brand, ingore their traditional items. Moreover, when forcing a standard over different societies in reality, globlization can make conflicts among groups.
In conclution, globlaization has both sides, positive and negative, in impacting on the world's economy and society. Understanding these influences, we need promote advantages and limit disadvantages for flourishing our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69545454545 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05344609546 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645454545455 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1797681358 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20397997813 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720120815216 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773571175281 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135752722508 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09087856121 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.