Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?
In this day-to-day society, the substantial amount of food has a tendency to be wasteful . There is plethora of reasons to this problem and I am going to point out some feasible measures.
One of the major issues to this is that the superficial knowledge of individuals. They do not have foundational understanding about the adverse influence on wasting foodstuff in any spheres particularly provoking the pollution to a marine ecosystem.
Moreover, the overall physical and mental conditions of people in the fast-paced world run a higher risk of experiencing full amenities such as physical facilities, entertainment, financial requirements,... which foster the human lives more enthusiasm and promotion. As a result, they no longer live in a saving way in order to spend expense resources. From my point of view, their need from food not only for full but only for keeping healthy and fresh lifestyles. That is one of the roof reasons that there is a flew of redundant food.
Finally, people are living at a breakneck pace to survive. They have been against the clock despite the fact that they are snowed under tons of work. Hence, they have no time to eat all food they order or cook.
One viable solution to this problem is for government. It is obligatory to enforce the legislation which comprises the regulatory constrains promoting citizens eating food with their suitable capacities and have stringent requirement that in any circumstances, each person who tends wasting their superfluous veggies are capable of paying penalties as well as punishments from the authority. Another measure is raising the poor awareness of people by launching the campaign associated with the severe impact of disposing food on the public places like crosswalks, cycle planes,... and making them become the garbage dumps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18027210884 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97593527312 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6836819108 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170695590674 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537540661624 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607285138581 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100331677644 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709592661789 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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