Many people think that avoid eating meat by being vegetarian so they can have a strong body. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea because I believe that using meat in meals plays an important role in the nutritional structure of each person.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why many people do not have meat in their meals. Firstly, vegetarianism is becoming more and more popular in the world. Scientists have also made claims that vegetarianism reduces incurable diseases such as high blood pressure, heart disease, and obesity. Secondly, people who eating meat are considered to be conscientious people, because they also contributed to the slaughter, hunting and mistreat these innocent animals. For examle, in the world, there are many rick people who using their money to be able to eat rare animals, because they want to express themselves as a person have a lot of money and that caused the extinction of many species.
On the other hand, I believe that meat is a main part in our daily diet because there many following causes. Firstly, nutrition in meat which play an important role in the development of the body. If the body wants to grow, it will need more nutrients from meat that vegetables do not have. Secondly, In order for our body to stay stable, we must plan to have a nutritious meal which have a balanced meal between every food with diet of meat, vegetables and other nutrients. For example, the protein in meat provides much needed nutrients for the body than vegetable’s protein.
In conclusion, becoming vegetarians and avoiding eat meat are not entirely true. Instead of, everyone should have a good diet , and balancing both meat and vegetables instead of favoring one side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8843537415 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60996257159 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6551982942 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347842447629 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11726321082 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524027143764 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208509576787 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273046772118 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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