Many people argue that people do not need to become a meat-eater to have a healthy diet. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.
It is apparent that a vegetarian diet is not good for some kinds of people. Firstly, children should not abandon meat from their daily meals. During the growing process, their bodies need to be supplemented with various nutrients and vitamins which are mostly contained in meat. For example, fishes are great sources of omega 3 and vitamin D, which are very essential for the development of brain and eye. Without these vitamins, children’s bodies cannot develop comprehensively. Secondly, a vegetarian diet with low calories is not suitable with manual workers who need a lot of energy. Plant foods are usually low in fat and calories. Therefore, a construction worker with vegetarian diet could suffer from a lack of calories to meet his energy needs. Consequently, he will unable to do anything energetic.
Apart from some disadvantages expressed above, I believe that the main reason for a person to become a vegetarian is moral or religious reason, but not health one. Most of people who abandon meat from their diets find it immoral to eat meat, produced by killing other animals. They believe that human has no right to take other animals’ life and that is the only reason why they become a vegetarian. In term of health, eating plant foods can only provide enough nutrients to survive but not to develop the body throughout. Human body needs to be feed with a variety of food, including meat, to maximize its capacity.
In conclusion, it seems to me that people should eat meat foods to have a healthy and well-balanced diet.
- Many people go to university for academic study More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers To what extent do youagree or disagree 56
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet Do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...r religious reason, but not health one. Most of people who abandon meat from their diets find ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93006993007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73824223927 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.30771487 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9411764706 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307287139713 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893348801962 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828834413762 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213571086727 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602636848039 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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