The notion that leading a healthy diet means digesting no meat justifies taking to being vegetarian. It seems to me that vegetarianism is not just regarding meat eating habits but relates to several other aspects.
As far as a healthy diet is concerned, the balance and adequacy of fundamental substances are central. The concept of healthy eating habits, being misunderstood widely, does not mean cutting off meat altogether but having a meal organised evenly by ingredients. For example, some vital substances being good for people’s health such as carbohydrates, proteins and fibers should be digested equally. Furthermore, to have a healthy diet, there are quite a lot other kinds of food that should be gotten rid of people’s diet. Fast food, sweetened drinks and packed meals, for instance, containing a great number of ingredients that are detrimental to people’s health, should be avoided eating.
On the other hand, vegetarianism might be connected with a love of animals as well as personal eating favour. It is argued that a sense of guilt for livestocks stands in the way of meat consumption. Vegetarians might often say that such animals are too familiar to our lives and eating them is such a cruel treatment. Another reason given for becoming vegetarian is the personal taste for food. Instead of opting for high-protein food made with meat, beef, fish and so forth, some people favour light meals that centre around vegetables.
In conclusion, I think people might choose to become vegetarian due to animal respectability as well as food preference. However, the assumption that eating meat is unhealthy should be eliminated and subsequently, it is necessary to have a rethink about the right way of having a healthy diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
The notion that leading a healthy diet means digesting no meat justifies taking to b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16197183099 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93168430472 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1341538391 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229233132825 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895029231195 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576566088565 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164341889634 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451719660051 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.