It would not be incorrect to state that nowadays people are not hale and hearty as they were in past. A cluster of like minded people voice that everyone should adopt vegetarian owing to its great benefits, which it offers to people. However, I could not agree more on it due to some well-established facts that would be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are slew of benefits of vegetarian diet. Firstly, vegetarian diet is very cheaper, and it is accessible for both rich and poor people. Secondly, fruits and vegetables help to reduce the weight of a person. Therefore, it can solve the over weight problems such as obesity. Lastly, this diet contains a
almost negligible amount of face. Hence, it is easy to digest, and maintains our digestive system in a proper condition.
On the contrary, a certain amount of meat is necessary because it is a part of balanced diet. Moreover, non vegetarian diet is a good source of protein, and it help to make muscles more stronger and flexible. To cite an example of it, Omega 3 fatty acid which is made up of fish, helps to increase the concentration of brain and eye's. That is why the role of non vegetarian diet can not be neglected in medical field. Not only this, meat realted diets are very essential for athletes, wrestlers and players because it helps to increase their performance by making a good physique.
To conclude, after ponderwing over all the above discussions it is quite evident that, although vegetarian diet offers some benefits, still far reaching positive impact of non vegetarian meat can not be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...le are not hale and hearty as they were in past. A cluster of like minded people voice ...
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Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
...g paragraphs. To begin with, there are slew of benefits of vegetarian diet. Firstly...
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Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... as obesity. Lastly, this diet contains a almost negligible amount of face. Henc...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...iet is a good source of protein, and it help to make muscles more stronger and flexi...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...of protein, and it help to make muscles more stronger and flexible. To cite an example of it,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82181818182 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70913727843 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6532750504 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180274999781 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567058998495 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425287477453 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831689904626 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441988577205 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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