Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
The most important reason for raising the school leaving age to 18 is that, the age of
14-18 is the most impressionable age of a child‘s life. During this period of
adolescence, the children undergo physical and hormonal changes because of
which they are under a lot of pressure. Therefore, lengthening compulsory schooling
helps protect childhood. While at school students will be protected from some of the
pressures in life. They have the rest of adulthood to work, make budgets balance
and make choices. Providing them with space to grow for as long as possible can
make them better prepared for adult life.
Secondly, more education provides the opportunity to acquire more skills and
therefore more options. It has been shown many times that those with more
education find it easier to find work and that they are more likely to find that work
satisfying. What is more, raising the school-leaving age is a crucial investment in
society's future. Doing so increases the economic potential of the future workforce,
and so will bring increased tax revenues in the long term.
However, the opponents claim that extending the period of compulsory education
requires a huge investment in teachers, books and new school buildings which
would be very expensive. They also say that many families need their children to
make an economic contribution to the family income and working early can help
these families to survive. Finally, just being in school does not guarantee that a
student is learning. Unwilling students become disruptive and damage the education
of others in their class.
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- Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion? 73
- Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33846153846 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7280484821 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9452531566 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959836736888 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350462942791 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466637822439 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0275080983621 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447632909038 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.