Everyone should stay in school until they rich the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree??
Unquestionably, learning in the school is the most important side of life nowadays. People on this global cosmos should remain in school untill they become 18 years old. I largely agree with the statement and this essay will represent the reason behind this.
To embark with, between the age of 14-18 body of child pass through many hormonic and physical changes and during this adolescence age they have to face lots of pain therefore, mandatory to stay in school is help them to enjoy childhood because after this they would be in take their important life decision and choices.
Moreover, they are able to learn more and acquire further knowledge for upcoming years.
Further more, pupils can get proficiency in various skills, which could help them in future jobs or open differ opportunity doors in life. Making school irrefutable for attendance can be a greatest gift for those persons, who loves to gain data and it will definitely change their life.
However, the opponent of this think that it should be more beneficial to start doing job and bring money to home because some family can not afford to spend more money on the studies, while it there is no guarantee to get a well paid job and some unwilling child spoil the standard of study and became barrier in other's studies.
To sum up, this has merits outweigh than demerits that is the reason why I largely agree with the statement and without any doubt make attendance necessary in school would help pupils and support them in development of bright future.
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- The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Everyone should stay in school until they rich the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?? 67
- Everyone should stay in school until they rich the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?? 67
- Everyone should stay in school until they rich the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...chool irrefutable for attendance can be a greatest gift for those persons, who lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85114503817 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3918358507 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0695651732 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.222222222 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166482968382 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686446777005 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663123224159 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790563969106 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593193797766 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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