In modern competitive era, the health obstacles and isolation suffered by many senior citizens but, many famous persons believe that if the elder spend leisure time with their kith and kin and excerise are also done by olders would be heathier and happier. There are several reasons for such a situation. However, some primitive steps can be taken to overcome the issue. My essay discuss both the reasons and measures are elaborated in upcoming paragraphs.
Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is senior citizen have money-minded and they want to work after 60 because they earn more and more money for their upcoming generation. Secondly, some older citizen do not reliance on any person so, they also do part time work and they donot have enough time to take care of their health and donot prefer to do exercise.
Futhermore, some old person live individually because there family move to urban areas for their children's education and for higher standard so, senior people feel isolation. Some time they go in depression and face some health obstacles. Moreover, no dobut if elder people go for regular walk, eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits they donot face any type of health issues thus, they also live healthy and happier.
Although some productive measures could be taken to resolve the problems. The formost measure is government should make the gardens, parks, gyms where older people go regularly and take exercise and prevent from diseases like obesity. Secondly, youngters also spend time with them and take care of their grandparents because older age is like a child age they donot know about what is right in this age.
To recapitulate, it can be retierated that if older people do exercise and take care their helath they donot face any type of health issue and government should open the libraries in villages so they go their and read books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...reliance on any person so, they also do part time work and they donot have enough time to...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they also live healthy and happier. Although some productive measures could be taken...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95268138801 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40790526021 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3622586212 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106319204226 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409620619594 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367956106747 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663622797443 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043434458532 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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