It is indubitable that we are heading towards a graying society. The life spans have increased, but along with it the problems if elderly related to health and social isolation have also seen a surge. This essay intends to analyse the reasons of this phenomenon and also suggest ways to mitigate the problem.
The main reason of social isolation of the elderly is that they find it difficult to let go. The elderly have held the reins of the household for a long time, and they want to keep that authoritative power. But, their children and grandchildren donnot want to be held back all the time because of their orthbox customs. So, they start ignoring them, which leads them to be secluded. If they spend time with youngsters, be flexible and adopt the newer ways of life, they would be more accepted in society.
Secondly, the health of the aging population is a major concern. Our body is just a machine and just like any machine needs lubrication from time to time to function well, the body machine also needs that oil. Exercise acts as the lubricant, which can keep the problems of the elderly away. The common problems faced by the elderly are hypertension, arthrists and diabetes. At a young age, is not much neended, but as the body machine grows older, it needs daily exercise. The elderly who do not exercise daily, suffer from these problems, which are further worsened because of thr financial constraints of the elderly, who are no longer working and earnings.
Simple steps can helps to ameliorate the problem. One thing that we have to accept gracefully is that we cannot run away from the problems of the elderly. We have to face them, and that too on a war footing, otherwise the situation is going to worsen and would be a big burden on the government. The elderly themselves have to plan for their retired life well in advance. They should try to catch up with the latest happenings and learn the use of latest technology, which can help them to be better accepted by the young people. Daily exercise should be a manadatory part of their day. The government should set up hoghly subsidized gyms for the elderly, along with free computer classes.
To conculde, the elderly themselves can alleviate the problems of the elderly, such as loneliness and failing health, to large extent, but the government can also take some steps.
- The tables show the population density in 6 countries and the increasing rate of urban population in 2008. 61
- Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work ans should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The tables show the population density in 6 countries and the increasing rate of urban population in 2008 67
- The chart below show the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, will projection till 2050. 73
- The chart below show the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, will projection till 2050. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75609756098 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51298116995 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50487804878 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2008880949 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924208995407 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251714586355 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293623184852 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462805444149 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305747247119 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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