Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
In recent years, human activities caused catastrophic damages to the environment. To reduce the impact, people and politicians must take strict measures and be responsible to what they have done to earth.
The speed of industrialization in many developed countries leads two major problems for the environment. Firstly, due to excessively burning fossil fuel, air pollution has become the big concern of every society and there have been few nations which do not tackle with this problem. Additionally, deforestation make the problem worse and there is less Greenland exist today in comparison with many years ago. Secondly, plastics which are not been decomposed for about two hundred years are produced more and more today. Consequently, we put our environment into the imminent danger if we do not have effective plan to fix the situation.
People and government are both responsible of earth contamination and they must take measures to solve it. Every country should set strict rules for its big manufactures to reduce the emission of greenhouse gas. They also must define high taxes for drivers and airlines and limit the use of private vehicles or unnecessary transportations. On the other hand, individuals must separate their garbage and put plastics or other reusable materials to be recycled. Not only do the recycling save the energy, but also prevent the amount of plastics in the environment. Moreover, they should have more careful about their consuming behavior like less dissipate water and other valuable sources to help earth recovery.
In conclusion, human activities have had harmful impact for the environment and this problem requires immediate actions by both individuals and governments.
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- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment What can governments do to address these problems What can individual people do 78
- Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment What can governments do to address these problems What can individual people do 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37918215613 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97682484531 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9101208184 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156094958364 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049095067457 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360762001308 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971912242066 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270360280342 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.