Failure is proof that the desire wasn t strong enough To what extent do you agree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should write at least 250 words

Success and failure are well connected without disappointment there is no pleasure in achievement. Many people tend to believe that defeat only occurred when there was a lack of desire. This essay completely disagrees with this perspective. In order to triumph a strong desire may not be enough always as luck and lacking of proper method or planned blueprint are also main reasons for failure.

In this globalized world, it is very easy to witness achievements of others. All of us run after success but only a few can have the taste of it. However, this does not mean that others lack desire since everyone requires their fair share of fortune to succeed. This may be a leading reason of someone's defeat. To cite an example, Although, every year during the admission time of BUET many show unbelievable wisdom, only a certain number of students have the fate. That does not mean others collapse in life they shine in other stages just not there.

Inspite of having hunger and luck, a planned approach is always needed. One can put maximum effort and not reach the limit he wants if the approach is wrong. Furthermore, a successful outcome always require a proper blueprint to follow without it many tends to fail. For instance, according to all great men, they overtook all competitors due to their tactical steps which lacked among others. In addition, a smart plan towards is a crucial ingredient for greatness.

In this competitive world it is quite common to fail despite having gigantic ambitions. Every great man requires their luck to flourish and an effective plan to pursue success. Therefore, it is not necessary that the root cause of failure is only the lacking of desire where bad fortune and faulty planning may exhibit as key reasons.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88963210702 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55915134394 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2167140886 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2222222222 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824910027486 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268738742137 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321382109781 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548419143988 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360417500063 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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