The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The provided diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles in factories.

Generally speaking, Noodles production is an eight-step process that starts with storing flour in the silos and finish with labeling the noodles cups.

A glance at the pictorial reveals that firstly, flour is accumulated in storage silos which are mixed further with water and oil by using a mixer machine. This creates dough sheets. Secondly, the produced mixture(dough sheets) is carried by a set of rollers and covert into strips in the following step. Afterward, strips are turned into noodles discs prior to cooking with oil. Drying of these discs also occurs in this step before inserting any ingredients.

It can be seen that after drying, products are gathered in cups. Next, they are released forward so that the ingredients such as vegetables and spices can be added to the cups before final tagging. Finally, the products are labeled and sealed properly in order to keep them fresh till consumption. Moreover, the whole cycle is done using automated machines.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64091909722 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3360521254 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8181818182 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118616921363 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473724799613 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105644030279 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120176301394 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146726729843 0.0819641961636 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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