Failure is a catastrophic experience for some people. Tons of questions were given on this topic, if failure is a proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough or not. I partially agree with this statement, that failure is based most on little effort. Indeed, failure is affected by more criterions, both from external effects and by ourselves.
At the first point, people fail to achieve their success due to low efficient productivity. Many people just want everything but they don’t even spend little endeavor on it. The most common reason why they can’t flourish achievements is they don’t know the dignity of purposes. When people can’t see a forceful reason, it will create internal force to help them achieve. To elucidate, if you want a kid to study harder and receive higher score at class, you have to civilize that kid the utility of studying and the kid must prosperously answer a question: “Why I have to do that?” If people can answer that question, they will able to reach to their aims and decrease failures, otherwise they can’t do anything.
On the other hand, I’m of the opinion that a person who really desires something can also fail. In facts, failure is a stable part in our lives and we are not purely perfect to accomplish something in the first attempt. It is not because we didn’t try hard and put efforts on it, it’s just that we didn’t have enough thinking patterns, and experience. Even Thomas Edison, a famous scientist who created electric light, were also fail thousands of time until he prosperously made the first electric light on the world. If we fail but we don’t give up our targets, and we continue expand our knowledge, one day we can succeed.
In conclusion, failure is based on many effected criterions, it is not only a proof that we didn’t try hard enough, but also a reality that we didn’t have enough experience. We are human and we have permission to fail. If we never give up our desire, we can do anything we want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'failed'.
Suggestion: failed
...t who created electric light, were also fail thousands of time until he prosperously...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77809798271 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58574842033 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544668587896 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1959382526 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166134918932 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055667277805 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813391941486 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116610729465 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986173515984 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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