Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this pop culture and materialistic scenario, it is a moot issue that parents of the offsprings who are enrolled in the private schools do not need to make a contribution through taxes. However, I utterly contradict this notion. This essay will scrutinize my viewpoint and provide a sophisticated solution.

At the outset of this new millennium, there is a greater imbalance in the privileged and unprivileged people who ceases the growth of the community indeed it is the most indispensable reason of not reducing the taxes of individuals. In addition, only affluent dwellers send their children to private schools so it is their fundamental duty to pay the taxes so that poverty-stricken class can get an exposure to the better education.

Moving further, it also plays a crucial role in the development of society. It is a well-known quote by Nelson Mandela that Education is the most powerful weapon we can use to change the world. Not just this, by imposing taxes on moneyed people, an education budget will burgeon and in turn, it adds up to the education peculiarities. This will boost up the literate workforce and the country will become more productive and prosperous. To epitomize, overseas companies need well-educated youngsters and merely well-funded schools can provide this.

Hammering the last nail of this topic, I would support that there should not be any kind of rebate to the families who send their adolescents to the private schools. Rather, the slabs should be identical to all the natives of same income level. The main rationale behind above steps is an elimination of inequality as well as tax theft.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, in addition, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05166051661 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00674839992 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4060995536 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288915663262 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824955323533 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701383448603 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16091087445 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473561739222 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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