There are manifold point to support my view.first and foremost,it is beyond doubt that taxes runs the country.To justify,To uplift the standard of education the nation government must take the taxes from citizen of the country to support the universal eeducation .Moreover,some think that if they send their children to private schools so they have no need to pay government taxes.Secondaly, the ratio of black money sharply increase because people never show the right data of their earning to the government.
On the other hand, government also took some soft steps to take short amount of tax from that families who don't sent their children to government schools.furthermore, people pay huge amount of money to the schools which is the duty of government authority took tax But if parents expenditure independently so they have no need to pay tax.
In my opinion,every person must paid government tax to achieve the more and more facilities from authority.Movingfurther, government should insist the citizen to pay tax.to examplify,if all people will pay tax then all are iqual and there is no difference between rich and poor.
To sum-up, government must take taxes from those people who earn more above a certain amount.if people spent money on taxes to support the universal education so all the people of nation get good education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15596330275 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1928846278 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.763857242 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.0 106.682146367 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.5 20.7667163134 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06120827912 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211873449457 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137481805528 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239728639238 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137481805528 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239728639238 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.0946893788 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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