Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
For a nine months period, women undergo drastic pain and changes during the pregnancy.They solely have the right to choose, whether to give a birth to a baby or not. Responsibility in bringing them is always argued, between father and mother. I do not agree with the statement as it seems to be faulty.
Firstly, woman take lot of struggle to deliver the child. In this span, there are enormous difficulties which a lady should go through to be healthy, leaving aside their personal desires. For Instance, they avoid eating the food that causes problems , as well as health issues. Although, raising the children in future until their adulthood is also the responsibility of both the parents.For the working individuals it's totally a difficult task to take care of both work and kids.Taking a decision to have a kid should be a mutual understanding against men and women. Therefore , women undergo lot of pain during pregnancy, it doesn't mean they are responsible whether to deliver a baby.
Secondly, economic conditions in the family should also be factor where they mutually discuss to plan for a baby. Both father and mother have equal responsibility to decide, because in future to raise a baby and take care of his/her education, monthly expenses, sports fees and more. For Example, in the present world, costs gone too high for a kindergarten pupil, parents should spend more than 50,000 rupees. Family's financial condions play a major role.
To Conclude, though ladies undergo lot of pain and difficulties during the nine month pregnancy, family's economical conditions also matters. Both father and mother are equally eligible to decide to have a child.
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...ligible to decide to have a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10545454545 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77493129913 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0512080143 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262530092121 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816901134317 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529059586747 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159740775502 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707366273926 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.