Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been a wildly held opinion about equality between responsibilties of mothers and fathers in a family. Nowadays, it is more likely for mothers to decide whether have a baby or not and it comes from the idea that mothers are responsible for bringing the child up. I agree with this approach. Investigating the contribution of time spent with mothers and difficulty of pregnancy shows this.
Fathers spend the most of the time of a day at work. So, children are accoumpanied by the mother most of the time playing, dining, shopping and other daily activities. They barely spend time with their fathers. Thus, it is logical to say the mother should devote her time and attention to bringing up a child rather than fathers.
Moreover, the responsibility of carrying the child until he or she is born rests on mothers. Meanwhile, fathers are comfortably continue their routines, a woman should cut back on her works and be more careful of child and herself simultaneusly. Therefore, it can be seen that it is hard for women physically and mentally to have a baby.
All in all, the decision to have a child should be the choice of women. Because they should prepare to divide their time between work, chores, husband, the baby and themselves as well. Besides, this difficulty is constant from before the birth of the baby and after that with a slight change in the level. From my vantage point, the main decision should be taken by women in order to be a mother.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...ers. Meanwhile, fathers are comfortably continue their routines, a woman should cut back...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72373540856 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66897140836 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8531573071 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194707667092 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627318546619 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827086124805 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115465768563 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552027266433 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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