Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Fatherhood should be given equal importance as motherhood. The notion that women alone decide on having children often extends to the assumption that they are solely responsible for raising them. I partially agree with this issue to some extent which I delineate below.
On the one hand, the imbalance in parenting roles places a significant psychological burden on women, as societal expectations often assign them primary responsibility for reproductive decisions and child-rearing. This pressure, rooted in cultural norms, can lead to stress, anxiety, and burnout, particularly when young mothers balance caregiving with careers. Furthermore, if fatherhood were mandated to be equally emphasised without addressing these norms, women might face increased pressure. Apparently, they could feel obliged to meet both traditional expectations of motherhood and new egalitarian standards, potentially disregarding their personal preferences and creating tension in diverse family dynamics.
In contrast, emphasising fatherhood equally with motherhood promotes a balanced upbringing, as both parents contribute unique perspectives and skills. Studies indicate that children benefit from active father involvement, with improved emotional and cognitive outcomes. This counters the notion that women alone should bear child-rearing responsibilities. Additionally, educating women about their role in nurturing and raising children alongside promoting equal fatherhood involvement helps dismantle outdated norms that place the burden of parenting decisions and childcare solely on women. By fostering shared roles, as seen in countries like Sweden with parental leave policies encouraging fathers’ involvement, societies promote gender equality and reduce the motherhood-centric bias, creating a more equitable family dynamic.
In conclusion, from my standpoint, emphasising fatherhood alongside motherhood fosters balanced child development and gender equality. This is as long as psychological, cultural, and personal factors are considered to avoid imposing rigid standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4128113879 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24750596711 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683274021352 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2762728237 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212782633798 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724968989832 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687413915053 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142370424793 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928596869082 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.9 12.4159519038 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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