Mothers are generally considered to be the important one, amongst parent, for the upbringing of children. However, some believe that fathers also need to be equally involved in child rearing. I cannot be agreeing more with the latter opinion, as I feel, that a child needs guidance and support of both of his parents.
The role of mother cannot be emphasised more for development of child. It is the mother who not only nourishes a child on birth, but also is the parent that child looks upto for care and comfort throughout his or her life. For example, a child when feels hungry goes to his mother demanding for food. Similarly, when he has scared due to nightmares at night, the child seeks comfort from his mother. This is primarily because the jobs of cooking and providing an emotional support are largely considered to be under female domain by the society. As opposed to that fathers are seen as bread winners, playing a role of ensuring monetary support for children.
However, in 21st century the society has undergone a change and is increasingly leaning towards father's role in child upbringing. Research has shown that just as a child needs comfort from his mother, he also needs a father figure to turn him into a model resident of society. While fathers, traditionally have not been involved in child care practices, research has shown that their participation in tasks related to caring of children, helps in increasing their bonding with their own off-spring. This early bonding is essential stepping stone for the future of the child, as it ensures that the child will feel secure to approach his father for his problems or advise in grown up phase.
To conclude, while mothers may be the decision makers for bringing the child into the world, in order to make sure that the child is brought in a good way, participation of both father and mother is important
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...lly involved in child rearing. I cannot be agreeing more with the latter opinion, as I feel...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n of both father and mother is important
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, while, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83900928793 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58078088685 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7053562708 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115556166988 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531372331302 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365587433901 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838193769783 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188568744029 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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