The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. What are your views?
The cars are used many people around the world. They are different company's are produced by the different models. Some company's are produced by small amount of price and some company's are produced by large amount of price. The car's are normally used and some other purpose used many people around the world. The company's are manufacturing different models then people attracted more in the world.
The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. The car's are motivated in company's by the different model in British country. The car's are appeared on British roads by the year 1888. This type of car's introduced by the British company's in British country. The car is running on the road but people's are not attracted by the car's. Some year's are running into the roads. After long time people's are attracted by car's.
The car's used many people's now a day's. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 millions vehicles on British roads. The car is most costly now a days because many people's buy a car by new model's in modern era. The car's company's are more around the world. The British road's are fully vehicles by the year 2000. Many of the people's are mostly used by a car's in now a day's. The 29 millions of vehicles used by the British road's by the year 2000.
The Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. The transport by one place to another place by used the vehicles. They should be encouraged by the Alternative forms. Some rule's and laws introduced to control car ownership and use. These are all should be fallow international laws by using car's.
The car's are used many people's around the world, So we can improve their driving skills and some international laws are must be fallow. The growth rate of car's must be increase by the company. The forms must be encouraged by the owner of the car's. If you are use the car's then must be careful on the roads.
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- The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. What ar 100
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...cars then must be careful on the roads.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266490765172 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.163588390501 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0870712401055 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0343007915567 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0131926121372 0.0437548338989 30% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134564643799 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0686015831135 0.0403226058552 170% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37302700003 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00791556728232 0.0326793684256 24% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.147757255937 0.0861772015684 171% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023746701847 0.021408717616 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1962.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 350.0 316.048096192 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60571428571 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294285714286 0.374742101984 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208571428571 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134285714286 0.203846283523 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0714285714286 0.137316102897 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37302700003 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.037074148 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.342857142857 0.56093040696 61% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 34.9043023973 60.7387585426 57% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0891783567 174% => OK
Sentence length: 12.5 20.7743622355 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5149485673 49.517814964 47% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0714285714 127.492653851 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.7743622355 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.214285714286 0.814263465372 26% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 3.99599198397 425% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 33.3571428571 49.1944974215 68% => OK
Elegance: 2.225 1.69124875643 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486692461566 0.332605444948 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.16284651016 0.102741220458 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0988505565898 0.0668466124924 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59795241719 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.117432790391 0.148594505496 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213092356951 0.134430193775 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137842113004 0.0742795772207 186% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.445172647807 0.324371583561 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121829440477 0.0638462369009 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334416588825 0.228012699653 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12418556303 0.058150111329 214% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 3.41683366733 498% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 1.9629258517 458% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.