First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?
Some people think that first impression is the most significant key factor to catch the recruiters’ attention. However, I personally think that the main objective we should concentrate on is how to represent ourself best in the interviews.
First of all, the reason why people usually reflect on the first impression is because we live in a modern civilization that gives prominence to the value of materialistic features and exquisiteness which tend to perceive our thoughts based exclusively on our appearances. For example, Albert Einstein was not an out-standing student in the eyes of his teachers because his first impression was not as extraordinary as his classmates yet he has become the most brilliant physicist of all time because of his true capacity.
Therefore, we should precisely regard an individual person’s true possibility such as his experience and his contribution for the company, and in order to fit the job description perfectly is to do well in the interviews. The crucial interpretation is to impress the recruiters with your professional conduct and responsibility. Moreover, it is also essential to develop a remarkable ability for long-term goals. After all, the only thing to help us move up the ladder in job is the individual’s potential that is represented in the interviews not the first impression.
In conclusion, the real ability and experiences are the benefits for us to take up an occupation in the company, it also tremendously helps us sustain higher position and attractive salary. First impression is considerable but not the whole thing at all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, after all, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31640625 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4092388514 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58203125 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3872064059 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.1 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178732315982 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703262268792 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645566492122 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105250842103 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505771188438 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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